CandySweetssJr's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Suppression]

I really like the contrast between the very dark areas and the texture of the fur. The shapes of the vines are spikey and are separated by the doe with hatching and the curves.There could be more dynamics in the head (more patches of light or darker shadows). My eyes are drawn to the doe's lower body, and the head seems to be less of a focus point.

I also like how you separated the vine from the doe with white lines, especially in more confusing areas such as the front of the doe. Overall, clean lines and good job :)

ExtinctionArts responds:

yeah i wasnt sure what else to do to the head i didnt wanna make the animal look TOO fluffly, but i agree there could be a lot more done to its face as a focal point. I sat on it for like 2 days thinking about what else i could do to it before i deemed it finished haha., thannks for always givin me some feedback :)

[Meow Parade]

Just a bunch of dorky cats who want to rule the world owo

It's a strange but good mix of weird and serious.

OatmealPecheneg responds:

Cats are taking over the world by internet :3

[Ic-0n]

Is it possible to get a wider shot to get all of the hair in the photo, or is that the sides of the page?

Slimera responds:

Its just the sides of the page, sorry. However all I cut off was the corners of the claws attached to her hair. :D

[Water Buffalo]

I like how the fur goes in certain directions to make the body look more 3D. I especially like the fur near the ribs to show the flaps of body.
Also, is there anything you can do about the lines caused by your window sill?

ExtinctionArts responds:

yeah i can just stop being lazy and go outside haha

['Nother Girl]

Is it me, or is the head too large?

Also, when working on shadows, you should figure out where the light source is. I'm guessing in this painting the light source is from the top. The shadows below her neck and on her legs are alright, but there are places that shadows should not be, such as the upper part of her face (like her cheeks) or her feet (the lower shadows are fine, but there are dark shadows on a large part of the upper surface). One more thing; the shadow on her boobs makes her breast unusually flat. Boobs are sorta like spheres, so the shadow from her neck and both the shadows and brights spots on the boobs should follow a curved surface.

Hopefully this helps a little :)

ExtinctionArts responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate all the tips. :) Also, the head is definitely too big. I just said "Im done" and posted it lol

[Ran and Shaw Tattoo (Commission)]

You have picked up digital art very quickly :). This is really great!

ExtinctionArts responds:

Thank you. Honestly, I used to do it bery little in the past but i always just gave up on it. Plus ClipStudio has been the only software that I actually have felt good using lol!

[Intelligent Weapon New (Commission)]

I think the clouds are good; your pen marks are clean, the clouds fit the style, and they don't try to distract from the attention of the sword ^u^.

ExtinctionArts responds:

thank you :)

[Headache]

In the photo, there are faint visible stripes on the paper. Do you know what's up with that?

ExtinctionArts responds:

yeahhhhh i don't own a scanner so I have to take a pic on my iphone and email it to myself so i can upload it. I went to my living room window and i guess it's the shadows from in between the screen haha.

[Terraria's Bosses Mayhem! Day 1 - Eye of Cthulhu]

I like the details of the Eye of Cthulhu, especially the bloody veins. The artwork feels empty near the bottom; maybe cutting a bit of the bottom canvas would help.

Are you going to draw a boss every day?

LucianoRomanJr responds:

That actually has an explanation, originally I was going to add clouds there but I don't know how to draw clouds so... lel

Yes or at least I'll tried

[fern]

I thought the fern was a creature of some sort, like a forest spirit. It looks like it has eyes on its "head".

maruki responds:

I like your interpretation!